Poem For Girlfriend.?

While I think it's very sweet and lovely what you wrote, at the same time it just feels abit unoriginal to me, cause it feels like something I've read/heard before time and time again, with love poems. I do love the lines "The look from your eyes when they hit my face made me paralyzed" as well as, "I’ll be unbreakable for your hearts fragile state, never letting it crumble," mostly because I'm a romantic at heart. :)